Tuesday, September 20, 2011

The LAST LIE by Stephen White *

Ok, so you wanna write a novel and your objective in the first page, first line even is to engage the reader. Get them right into the story. Shove the story hard and fast so they want to finish the book. Am I right?
Then tell me why a cop meets a woman outside a cop station and it takes 10 pages, an entire chapter before she says "I was raped." WTF?

Author: You didn't get my interest. You bored me. Returned to library.

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