MCP to the max. Meets a chick and within 12 hrs she's naked in his bed, then meets 2 new chicks (don't know each other) who then "explore" his home and he goes upstairs to find them BOTH naked in his bed waiting for him. So true to life. O wait...must be fantasy novel trying to be a mystery. The mystery is; does he dope them up before they fall naked into his bed or does his dick dangle out the bottom of his pant legs.
Screw #3 is a cop for gods sake.
One part of the story is about an actress (screw#1) and her revengeful ex. The other part of the story (screws#2&3) is about a painter and his young about to be wealthy girlfriend that daddy wants to protect. And Stone really really likes to 'take care' of women. Wonder how often he's checked for STDs. In two novels I've read ZIP on the VD check and boy he's gotta be going blind any book now. (syph)
So it's pretty incredible that Stone in ONE NIGHT meets the most beautiful woman he's ever seen (as they all are), screws her, hears her life story, arranges body protection for her, gets her travel arrangements and moves her into his house. Which is weird cuz while he's stuffing the other girls in his crib she's not there. He really sounds like a stalker doesn't he? At minimum oink oink.
As far as writing goes; not bad. Plot; not sure if any good or not. Bated breath factor; nope. Surprises; not many. A story is written everything is predictable and falls happily into place no conflict of which to speak. Ok on the character development but the characters share juvenile traits and behaviors. General age range should be mid 20s-early 30s according to their mindless behavior.
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