I started this one then abandoned it in boredom. Here is the main character, here is her main story, then "this is my life" she says that over and over it should be the title. Then a new character, and here is his life. New person, new life. On and on. And on and on and intros all around. They all are killers or have lost someone in their past to violence. This is a weird crowd with lots of mental issues. I suppose in a future chapter someone grabs a weapon and shoots them all in the head and we'll need to be intro'd to new characters with the same blahblahblah. Lots of characters before 30 pages with their life histories. I hate that. HATE it.
Someone is getting married, a car screams into the lot throws a bald bloody woman out and drives away. Next thing you're at the hospital with her description, her marks, everyone in the hospital goes home, more about her condition blahblahblah....just a waste of time. No ACTION. No interest. Buh bye.
DONE.
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