So far it's ok I have plans to keep reading and I'm on page 10.
It's a limp dick romance mystery about egg/sperm donors who are finding out some weird "experiments" were happening instead of helping infertile couples. So the lead couple have some kids running around somewhere.
Written by an older (elderly?) person with strange terminology like 'guff' that she makes a like 30 yo woman say. This is another convenient problem solver where shit just falls into place, like 2 people meet in their twenties then just happen to be boarding the same plane 10yrs later to go reveal information from their twenties they were both involved in. Ta da! They are suddenly in LOVE. And a severely mentally handicapped KID in a library FULL of people conveniently draws a picture of total strangers mom, dad, and killer so everyone can pass that out to the FBI who are so blatantly stupid they're tricked by the killer with a fake ID to leave the scene of a brutal shooting. Riighhtttt. The killer tells them he'll report them to some higher up wingnut if they don't leave and go to NY so they do. BWWAAAAAHAAA
FBI they're not the brightest bulbs in the box but come on. Even like a half day later they are still believing fake ID?? No one is covering the crime scene? Give it up lady. And the child this couple is trying to find is under 18 yrs old and over 6'2" tall. I find that somewhat distracting. I keep going HUH?? All the time. He can hide in a mouse hole and crawl thru vents etc...I mean come on....srsly?? Fer real? He outruns adults...he's he's superman!
There are ghosts in this story so of course it's hard to tell who "soccer player' is and who everyone is talking to alive or dead. It gets confusing. It's wishy washy and old ladyish TO ME. I read a lot of books and that's my thoughts on it. It's not hard to follow, very few descriptions of people faces etc but it's not horrid. I'll finish it which is more than I can say about some books.
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